Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, July 3, 2019
Bubbles
We got to choose if we wanted to write a Narrative, a Recount, a Information Report, a Persuasive writing, a Poem, a Explanation or Procedure. I choose a Narrative. I went on to Pobble 365 and choose different pictures then wrote a story around them. The dates of the pictures I choose are 24/12, 27/12, 2/7 and 29/5. Please say below in the comment section if I can do something better.
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Hey Soph,
ReplyDeletethis is really great writing. You are really good at it!! I love the describing words you are using the 'prickly' tree puts me in the moment!