Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, August 5, 2019
Did you like the ending?
On Mondays we have Book Club as usaul I choose the Explorer. What we had to do was read our book club book then answer the new Question. the Questio was: Did your book end the way you wanted it to? How would you change the ending to your story to improve it? You will need to explain a little about your book and whether you liked the ending or not. Please comment below on how I can improve
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Thanks Soph for sending through
ReplyDeleteYou could try making the Explorer writing white on the blue background to increase the contrast :)
I haven't read the story so I can't comment on your comment :)
Dad