In our art we had to include things about us and what we like. This is mine:
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 14, 2020
Priceless Protrait
In our art we had to include things about us and what we like. This is mine:
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI really like your portrait it is colorful and fun looking. I saw that you put chocolate on it, that's cool because its my favorite food.
maybe next time you can push a bit harder with the pencil to make it stand put better so theirs no gaps.but other then that it looks really cool.
By Skylah
Thanks Skylah! I will remember your tip for next time! What is your favourite flavour of chocolate?
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